All About Me 2017


My name is Eloise. I love to dance, swim and write stories. I LOVE dogs. I used to have my own dog but sadly we had to put him down due to complications of old age.

My favorite holiday I have been on would be when I went to the gold coast for a week.

My dream holiday would be a trip to California.

My favorite colors are pink and blue.

I dance nearly every day of the week and swim once a week. I am a passionate dancer and a strong swimmer. The types of dancing that I do are tap, jazz, ballet, contemporary, acrobatics, hip hop, solos, competitions and R.A.D which stands for Royal Academy Of Dance.

Both of my parents are Nurses.

On the holidays I went away to Ocean Grove. We went away on Christmas eve and came back on the 30th of December. We spent a lot of time at the beach. It was fun, nice and relaxing.

With my future carrier I would like to become either a teacher, an architect, a vet, a doctor, a nurse or become the Prime minister of Australia. And if your wondering I don’t know what I’m going to do about Australia’s borders and Tax issues quite yet so please don’t ask.


Safer Internet Day Reflection 2017

-What did the webinar cover 

Today we were involved in a webinar chat which talked about safe use of your accounts and posts online and how that is your digital footprint. It talked about how if you post something online then that can lead to people leaving hate comments, hackers, people trying to steal your personal information e.g. phone number, address etc or people messaging you and threatening you, by being mean and making you upset. It also said that if you get famous online then you can be stalked, a lot of people will try to hack your account and you loose a lot of your privacy rights. Everyone has the right to feel safe and secure, to be different and to have their privacy to be private. If your feeling sad or upset about something online then you should always talk to a trusted adult or go to the eSaftey Website.


– What behaviors did they talk about that we already do

They spoke about how to react/respond to people hating or being rude on your account, they said to talk to a trusted adult ( parents, grandparents, auntie, uncle) or report it to someone. If  your feeling unsafe online then you always have people to talk to so always remember that you are not alone.


– A goal to set for future internet use

If someone messages me in a rude, threatening, mean or scary way then I will make sure to always tell a trusted adult and make sure that I don’t keep everything to myself. I will always know that I am not alone and I always have someone to talk to




100wc- Mission to Mars

Mission to Mars. 100 word challenge


I can see a golden planet floating around our solar system. I have been informed that I have to find out if Mars is okay to live on. After travelling through space for what seems like forever I’m super excited that I’m finally allowed to get out of that rocket! Okay this is it! I’ve opened the door and took 3 steps on the planet. “Mission control can you hear me?” I asked in excitement.

“We can hear you loud and clear.” They replied.

“This planet is amazing!”

“Do you think its good enough to live on?”

“I’m not sure.”   I said

100wc- A picture




” Okay class, we’re here.”

” I want my mummy…” I told my big year 5/6 buddy.

“It’s okay you will be safe with me.” We walked around the zoo for about 15 minutes until we froze in our footsteps. Everyone started screaming and running around the place. The teacher yelled;

” Children, children it’s just a sculpture!” Everyone stopped running to take a good look at the sculpture. It had a face with yellow eyes and a big scary mouth. It had big hairy legs coming out of the pot and the pot was really dark red.

” That”s really scary.” I said.

Book review

Reviewer’s name: Eloise

Title: The Bad Beginning

Author: Lemony Snicket

Characters: Violet is a 14 year old who loves inventing things, Sunny is a 1 year old girl who loves biting things and finally Klause is a 11 year old boy who loves books.

Setting: Olaf’s house

Storyline (plot): Violet, sunny and Klause lost their parent’s in a fire and have to spend time with count Olaf.

Your opinion: I loved all the action and adventure in the book

Rating: 4/5

100 word challenge


  1. I am looking forward to the 400 meter sprint
  2. I am aiming to get close to 1 meter for long jump
  3. I can’t wait to see what skills other people have on athletics day
  4. I’m really looking forward to long jump because last year I won out of my age group
  5. I am looking forward to cheering my team on
  6. I am looking forward to competing against other people
  7. I am excited to be hanging out with new people not just my friends.

I can’t wait for athletics day!

100 word challenge

  1. I need to be more officiant in personal writing.
  2. I would like to practice using area models
  3. I want to get better at using the estimation strategy
  4. I want to get better at summarising non-fiction texts
  5. I want to know some more of my place value columns beyond 100 billions
  6. I would like to work on my multiplication
  7. I need a lot of help with my spelling and grammar
  8. I need to start using my mathematician’s toolbox more often
  9. I need to work on my persuasive text structure
  10. To come up with more exciting ideas for my writing

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