100wc #7

PROMPTAlthough they ran quickly, they were still not making enough progress

Although he ran quickly, he was still not making enough progress. I saw it with my own eyes but I didn’t believe it. A security guard was being chased by something but I couldn’t quite make out who or what it was. It was just a blur. It whizzed behind me and it’s skin was ice cold. Suddenly the security guard was pushed to the ground like he weighed nothing. I heard a loud scream that made me jump. Right in front of me lay his ice cold body, dead.

2 Responses

  1. sofiama2016 says:

    Hi Eloise,
    Really nice post here. I really like the feeling you have created while writing this, what was your inspiration? I have a feeling but i’m not sure.
    Good Job
    Sofia- http://sofiama2016.global2.vic.edu.au/2018/04/18/100-word-challenge-although-they-ran-quickly-they-were-still-not-making-enough-progress/

  2. Eloise's exciting blog says:

    This is related to Twilight for all those Twilight fans

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