I can’t believe my dad always drags me to his stupid golf practices, whatever they’re called. At least there’s a cafe so I can hang out there, text my friends and post selfies on Instagram. One day I was on my way to the cafe and I came across 2 large footsteps on the golf course. I wondered what it could be. Panic brushed over my face. I reminded myself that this was a golf course and someone must of made a dint in the ground with golf clubs and forgot to cover it with sand. I saw a shadow behind me.


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  1. harguan2016 says:

    Hi Eloise
    I really liked how at the end it was such a short sentence it was like “oh no” and it gets the reader wondering what will happen next I thought that this was a great 100WC
    Great job!!!👍👍👍

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