100wc

We were at a sleepover last week and we were telling horror stories. The room was lit by a single candle. we were in the middle of a story that involved a ghost. Then suddenly it went dark. Lighting struck outside the house. We could faintly see a shadow approaching us. Suddenly Charlotte was gone. Then Lilly then Megan then it was only Sofia, Chloe and I left. Who would go next I wondered. then all of my friends came out laughing. They played a joke on me!

2 thoughts on “100wc

  1. Great Work Eloise I really liked how you grabbed the readers attention in this piece and before I found out it was a joke it left me guessing who would go next!
    Great Work
    Gracie.B.

  2. Hi Eloise,
    I really like this story because the reader is actually thinking “what happened?” and “who will go next?” and then it all turns out to be a joke which is pretty funny. I sounds like something our group of friends might do to you.
    Sofia

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